Argument of Park Geun-Hye
This year it's a period of presidential election. It's very important.
Voting for presidential election have a meaning for democracy. That means we have a chance for perform our opinion at the political. I respect to all of the presidential candidate, but I don't agree with Park presidential candidate.
Park she is a quite remarkable leader. She had save for the organization that she exist. And right now she is the leader of her organization that is exist in the political, that have a quite big meaning in this generation.
Peoples say if she will be a president in this state, she will revive the economy of korea. But I do not agree of her value, a world view that she have.
First we have to know that she have a quality to be a president for us. But i'd said I do not agree of her. Because she had a father named Park Jung-Hye that perform the coup and be a dictator that breaks the law of democracy. Peoples have a natural rights of man that the law have gave them. But Park Jung-Hye he ignore the law and have killed too many people because of his belief he have.
Futhermore, she did not reflect or apologize the past that her father done. less then she is busy to rationalize that her father done. I want to say is she have a problem in her attitude.
It is true if we vote the candidate that assert for healing the economy, and really heals up? Every one have the different opinion, but I don't think is true. Seeing for Lee Myung-Park, at the past when he was the member of presidential candidate, he inform to us that he will heal up the economy, but did he really heal up the economy? He didn't help the economy he just made us mad of his opinion.
Some peoples says even if Park Jung-Hye had despotic the government and killed many peoples, he had reverse the economy and make korea strong, i'm sorry to talk but it is a dangerous mind. Healing up the economy is our job to do. Even if he help the state to make strong, breaking the law of democracy is unpardonable to do. It is like using the hand during the game of soccer to win.
Voting for the candidate that assert for democracy it will be very a value thing for the state. I wish there will be no problem like the past.
by Daniel
ReplyDeleteDaniel,
ReplyDeleteSo is the main reason you do not like this candidate is because they want to abolish democracy? Do they think abolishing democracy helps the economy? I am confused about this. What other values does this candidate stand for?
Daniel! I could learn more about Park Jung Hye and Park Guen Hye and get critical eyes!
ReplyDeleteWhat do you think about her mom, Mrs. Yuk?
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ReplyDeleteI also don't like her, because she is daughter of Park Jung-Hee. Also, I don't like 새누리당. What do you think about other candidates?
ReplyDeleteWow. Daniel. You did it MAN! I strongly agree with your opinion claiming that although Jung Huee Park have strengthen our economy, still it's based on the corruption of democracy, so it's another failure.
ReplyDeleteI hope you to revise your essay caring on grammar and tense.
Before asking a question, to clear my opinion, I think we can't argue about the politik right now, because actually we don't have any specific-exact knowledge or own experiences about it, but we're just inheriting our parent's view or what media's say.
In your view, how we should learn 'real'(not in the workbook) politics? How we should prepare to be a citizen in a society in this age? Is it early? (sorry for many questions.)
First, thank you for sharing your opinion with us. Your essay topic was very interesting, though it was tough for me to read.
ReplyDeleteBut some of your opinions conflict with mine and I think you criticized her too much with your personal opinions, not with objective supports, though some of it might be true since I'm not very familiar with this topic.
Please remember that an argument essay should have proper supports for every main points. You mentioned her father, President Park Jung-Hye, and said that she might be same as her father. But I think it might not be appropriate since it's just one of your predictions. Of course, if there was any evidence proving or supporting it, it might have been a good support for your opinion. But I couldn't find any facts supporting it in your essay.
Anyway, thank you for sharing again. And here my question goes. You said that President Lee failed to revive the economy and it's our duty to do so. Why do you think he failed? What do you think we should do in order to 'heal up' economy for ourselves, not by government?
Daniel is strongly against voting for the candidate Park Geun Hye. Even though she had saved the big organization that she exists right now and some people say that she will develop the Korea's economy, he says that Park Geun hye's value and view she has to the world is not acceptable. First, her father was a president named Park Chung hee who developed the Korea's economy . However, in a bad way. He refused and ignored all the democracy which Koreans must have and also killed many people who didn't agree with him. Second, regardless of what her dad did in the past, she doesn't apologize it.In the essay, Daniel says Park Chung hee had made Korea strong but breaking the law. So he thinks this is like using hands in a soccer game. He says he wants no more problem like the past.
ReplyDeleteI've read your opinion really fun and it was good to know about your opinion:) I have a question! Since you said that developing economy is good but not in a bad way like breaking the law. Do you have any idea of developing an economy in your way:)? I think it's a hard question. But It's okay starting from a very small thing! I'm curious about it.
DeleteWow. Daniel wrote a good essay.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your opinion about Park Geunhye and her papa.
Then, who do you think is the best president in Republic of Korea's history?