After 10 years,I would open a bakery business with counseling system primarily in the world. I plan this business to be worldwide. This business goal is to offer both employees and people who find this place find peace of God and pleasure sharing love. 30% of total revenue will go to orphanage. Counselling system will be divided in to 3 room for kids,teen and adult. I want them to feel much better eating sweet cookies, muffins and many other cakes. Oh! the bakery name is 'mammy bebe'.
To open this business will need lots of preparation so I will go to abroad to learn about opening christomical bakery with my husband. I want to experience the new culture and see how god works in other country. I expect this time to be best in my life because going abroad and live there is one of my dream. I hope I will be in America with my husband after 10 years~
Who I will be? well, I hope I would be the person who take control of emotions very well and see everyone as my brother and sister. Being a human I hurted many people's feelings ,and I still feel sorry for some of them because I couldn't say sorry for many reason .I started to pray when I was middle school senior(중3) and I'll pray until the end of my life.I think it's really important to use every part of my body as god created for .I really want to use my mouth and heart to courage and love others.
I want to go to your bakery after 10 years! I know you will give me the best bread that I have not eaten before. Combination with bakery and faith is so fresh to me. I like your essay
ReplyDeleteWow. It is very specific plan. I like your last sentence. By the way, what is 'Mammy Bebe' means?
ReplyDeleteAmazing... your dream is wonderful. I didn't noticed that you have an interest on baking. I think this is a very creative and meaningful job.Also, giving 30% of revenue to the orphanage? wow. Shame on me! lol. I will go to your bakery only if it's near where I'll live in 10 years later. I think your essay will be very smooth if you check out your grammar more carfully.(What's funny is even I have many mistakes too when I'm writing)
ReplyDeleteI have a question. Are you preparing for being a baker? Are you going to learn about a management?
I wonder that you have a very specific dream. I will be a regular of your bakery. I think it's a good idea to combine a counseling system with a bakery. (I think it will be much better if the bakery have a cafe inside.)
ReplyDeleteAnd there's few grammatical mistakes and typos in your essay. I think your writings would be much better if you read it several times before you post it (I read my essay 2~3 times before I submit it.)
I like what you're dreaming. And what are you going to study if you are going to make a bakery with counseling system, something about baking or something about counseling?
Alice I really love your essay. I am strongly impressed of your creativity to combine your love, bread and sharing God's love. I hope to eat your wonderful bread one day. I think the essay would be more easier to read if you checked some capital letters. Still, it was really nice to read !! :-) And in this 'Counselling system will be divided in to 3 room for kids,teen and adult,' how could you think of such a nice idea? Have you ever visited any place that inspired you to think of this?
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ReplyDeleteI feel like I know you so much more after reading this essay! It is truly an incredible hope and dream. I think your fusion of food and counseling is so biblical in how we should approach the gifts and passions God has given us. You are seeing a vision of providing food, a basic need to everyone in the world, and then Food, the spiritual need of mankind, and putting them together, which reminds me of John 6 when Jesus tells his disciples He is the Bread of Life and then shortly after he provides bread to the 5000 and the disciples still didn't understand his message. I think this kind of dream shows that message. I like it a lot.
I think hurting others and forgiving is a struggle we will have in our lives because we are sinners. But through Christ's love we can endure and learn forgiveness and grace as we grow. One of my favorite bands says this in a song, "the beauty of grace is that it makes life not fair." Thank you for sharing your beautiful heart with us.
This is a song by the way from Relient K called "forgiven." Its a really great song for the struggle we all face in relationships whether they be friendships, romance, mom and dad, etc. I think all of you guys would enjoy it. http://youtu.be/2oDVomnRxQU
ReplyDeleteAlice I am sure you can reach your dreams. Since I have seen you close for a long time I know how talented you are and how great you are. I love you so much and you hae a beautiful heart and amazing talents. :)
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ReplyDeleteOh I didn't know that your dream was being a baker. But I am concerned about that if you donate 30% of profits, you cannot make good living. I am curious how you made up your minbd to be a baker.
ReplyDelete"I really want to use my mouth and heart to courage and love others." This sentence is wonderful:)! Your essay really impressed me a lot think again about God. I think your essay has many lessons. By the way, I'm surprised that you have a dream opening a bakery! I guess it's a influence from your mom. Is that right?;-) I think your bakery will be so pretty and cute. I'm curious that what made you to have a dream making a bakery. Will you invite me to your bakery in 10 years?
ReplyDeleteWow what a patheic eassy.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know your dream was being a baker. Is it okay to eat your bread at free?? I really hope it.
I hope you will develop your wonderful abilty that god gaves you.
wow, you have specific dream!! I like your bakery's name ! haha
ReplyDeletewhen you open bakery, please tell me, i will go and buy many breads. Do you have hobby at making breads.
from Cindy Kang- WOW I didn't know that your dream is being baker! Hope you become great baker after 10years. Oh maybe we can meet at America at that time.. HAHA And i want to use my mouth and heart to courage and love others too ..
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