I am 17 years old now. So 10 years ago, I will be a man in the golden age. I performed military duties then. Also I have a wife at that time because I will marry right after college. I will be a traveler at 27. I will travel all over the world with my wife. I will widen my point of view through traveling the world. And also spend happy time with my lovely wife. I will write about what I felt and my wife will take pictures or draw pictures about what she saw when we travel.
After the traveling, I will become a writer. I will publish a book that has my travel notes with my wife's pictures. It will be awesome. Anyway, my wife and I will live in quiet place. So we can live in peace. Also I will be a father soon, so I will prepare a room for my baby. I will do my best to be a good husband and a good dad.
It will be happy life at 27 years old. Because I already met God then. Moreover, I have a wife who loves me and I have some great friends. I am very glad now because I just thought about my beautiful future. There might be a harsh time to get through but I will go forward with my beloved family, friends and God.
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ReplyDeleteYou are a happy person who can imagine oneself's future brightly, Brian. :) Your essay is full of hope, and I could smiled quitely while I'm reading your essay. I hope you'll live out this innocent dream.(Babies... you're fast... lol jusk kidding.)
ReplyDeleteHowever, I found some grammar mistakes on your essay.I'm not good at it too,anyway, I recommend you to look article parts of Grammar In Use, that gave me a lot of help to my misery grammar.
Now, I have several questions. First, you said that you'll live in a quite place, where it would be? Second, traveling the world is obviously a difficult work. Can you tell me about the specific plan? Thank you.
I really enjoyed your essay :-) I'm so glad that you're imagining your future very positively.
ReplyDeleteAt the same time, I see some uncompleted sentences and grammatical errors in your essay.
And I have a question: How many babies do you want to have?
Brian, I could imagine your happy future while reading your essay. I am sure you will be a good husaband, good dad, and a good writer. I am looking forward to read your book :-). But I think it would be better if you change 'So 10 years ago,' to 'So 10 years later'. I think it was just a mistake. Oh! And where would you like to travel around?
ReplyDeleteBrian,
ReplyDeleteWow, I agree with your friends. Your essay made me smile big, because it was indeed so very hopeful and refreshing. The fact is, we don't know where we will be in ten years. Only God knows, but we can imagine and dream and have hope because of Him and His love. I see this emitting in your work. I look forward to reading the books you write and meeting this oh so lovely wife of yours!
The verse that came to my mind while reading this is Psalm 118:24 "This is the day that the LORD has made. Let us rejoice and be glad in it!" I could feel the hope for today and tomorrow reading this. Thank you so much Brian!
No I bet you won't have a wife that early! However your essay is funny, so I like it. What type of woman do you want to marry?
ReplyDeleteWow I really enjoyed yyour essay. I want live a life like you. But I am curious if your plan is realistic. Who will be your wife?
ReplyDeleteIt's my pleasere to read your essay. Wow is it possible to marry at 27?? Maybe it could be piece of cake to you!
ReplyDeleteYou are one of the most happiest person I've ever seen. I like your dream how you want to live in a queit place to live in peace and I also like how you want to write about what you travled which will have pictures of your wife as well. Your essay is very funny and makes me happy as well. But I think marrying right after college is a little too early. Why don't you travel by yourself and have some of your days just for yourelf?
ReplyDeleteYou have such a lovely dream and I think it;s really amazing. Just by reading your essay it makes me feel sweet. Also I think the dream fits you well. Really!!!! It's an amazing dream for sure. Do you have any places you have in your mind right now? Have you found some beautiful places you want to travel with your wife?
ReplyDeleteWow I think your dream is very romantic!! and I hope you to be a great writer. I will be a reader of your book. But i have a question, that realistically your dream is hard to be come true.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, How many children do you want to get?? ^^
from Cindy--You have a similar dream with me Ben! I wannaa be traveler and travel all around the world. And your second dream that being a writer is interesting .. Hope you enjoy your life peacefully and way that you want..
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