Saturday, September 8, 2012

Gandi essay 1


In ten years, I will be in a hospital doing internship. I will study hard to get ready to go out abroad. There are so many doctors who does not care about their patients and only care about their money. If I become a doctor I do not want to use my skills and gifts on that. I will go around the world helping people who are sick.
Second, I will be a person who prays all the time. I think the most important thing in my life is prayer and without that, I am useless. Even if I cure many people, and so many people becomes healthy again, it would not mean anything to my life without prayer. I will be a volunteering person. Helping others I think is really important because Jesus helped us.
Finally, I will become a doctor. I will study really hard and go to a medical school, and study really hard. I want to spend a lot of time in my life helping others. There are so many kids in this world who cannot get proper medical health care. I want to become a person who helps them. 

13 comments:

  1. These day ,I see you changed a lot to a brighter and energetic kid.I'm so happy for you! saying that I want to be a doctor is easy but you know that the process will be tough! but I think you can overcome and find your total goal! remember whether you become doctor or not! you are a great lovely? god's child.

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  2. Wow there will be lots of doctors in sammuel high school. I like your opinion that you won't care about the money. I heard that your parents are both doctors, did that influence to yo to become a doctor?

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  3. you are also doctor. wow I just replied to Dr.jongwon.
    I feel safe even i am sick in future, because of you guys.
    I hope you to be a praying doctor who takes care of kids who can not get proper medical health care.
    Gandi, will you help me later, when i am really sick and i have no money.

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  4. Gandi I am really impressed by your essay.:-) 'Helping others I think is really important because Jesus helped us.' This sentence made my heart really warm!! I am sure you will be a great doctor giving medical help to the ones who cannot get medical things. And I want to ask you if you have any mind in MSF.

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    1. The essay would have been better if you wrote more about it. Still I really enjoyed it !!:-)

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  5. Gandi,

    I liked the simplicity of your essay. It was easy to read and down to the point. I think it is great you want to be a doctor. What kind of doctor do you want to be? Where would you like to go when you study to be a doctor? I agree with Sinah that adding more would have helped, but I appreciate what you wrote :) Thank you Gandi!

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  6. I was really impressed when I saw you praying in our prayer meetings. I definitely agree with you that the most important thing for our lives should be praying.
    And I also agree with Sinah that your essay would be great if you wrote more. I'm curious how did you got interest on being a doctor.

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  7. I am truly surprised by your destiny! I think you should cure some kids in Korea not with physical problems but their mental mind. I hope that you would be a kind doctor.
    I wonder how did you come up with being a doctor?

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  8. Gandi! I firmly agree with the sentence that we are useless without a prayer. I think sometimes we are focusing on the good behaviors those can be a helped to people more than God's work, but as you said, I think it's more important to pray for them because when man works, man works, but when man prays, God works.
    However, you can dream that you will go around the world and help sick children, but God might lead you to another way of serving. So this is my question, Who will be served by you, if God stopped you to go around the world but stay in korea? Will you going to work in a hospital?

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  9. 'Useless without a prayer' this sentence really touched me. I guess there are many students who really want to be a doctor in the future! including you! I really hope all of you guys to become a great doctor who are used by God. I have a question. You said that you want to go abroad. Are you going abroad to go college and study or are you going there to help people? I'm curious.

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  10. Also doctor! Haha, I hope you become a docor. What kind of department do you want to go? I think after 10 years you should do internship, or duty of Army. I know Jesus will be with you!

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  11. What a chunky essay. I hope u will be a great doctor.
    Do u have a role model? if u have, can u tell us why?

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  12. Sorry for reply late, Gandi.
    You said in class that you want to learn medical science in Seoul University. But there are many people who doesn't graduated Seoul University and they serve people well. So, are you saying that you want to study very hard or just want to go to Seoul University?

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